REFLECTION ON FIRST DRAFT

The main changes I made after reflecting on the first draft were:

- Changing the artist's name in the titles - I chose to include Jerry Folk (JF) - who remixed the original song - instead of Oh Wonder (OW) as JF is a definite dance/electro artist, whereas OW are an indie-pop duo, so by using JF it enabled me to meet the criteria properly and create a digitally convergent website that features more conventions of dance music.

- Adding more black and white sections - I did this in order to continue the theme further into the video, whilst the tempo of the song was still slow.

- Recolouring clips - This entailed mainly adjusting brightness and saturation of clips and was done in order to create a more vivid image that is more easily recognisable to the audience as being summer.

- Adding clips - I added clips that cut back to the couple on the beach at 2:00-2:04 as I felt that the studio clips of the actress gazing into the camera were too stationary compared to the song and other sections of the video.